Tuesday 5 February 2013

Alisi


Bio Poem

Learning Intention: To write a poem bio
Success Criteria

  • Should be modelled on the structure below
  • Use highly descriptive language (focus on adjectives)
  • Should make you feel satisfied that whoever reads it will know a good deal about who you are.

Alisi


Respectful, Kind and Caring.
Lover of Chocolate, Fruits and Reggae music.

Who wonders a little girl going through a lot of work to get money.
Afraid of Ghosts, Big Spiders and Clowns.

Who feels Happy when someone helps you with your work. Sad when someone dies. Angry when someone teases you.
Who is able to help someone by giving them money to buy food.

Who like to see Artworks, read books and sing songs.
Who dreams everything will be made out of metal in the future.

5 comments:

  1. I really like your bio poem and feel that I know a little more about you after reading it. Ka pai

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  2. Malo e lelei Alisi

    I enjoyed learning about you through your bio poem. I can tell you are a kind and thoughtful person with a good imagination by reading it.

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  3. I'm so glad to hear you love artworks and reading. So do I Alisi.

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  4. Hey Alisi
    I like your bio poem it is awesome I can imagine us in the future with metal you must of got it from the books you read.

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  5. Hi Alisi I really like you work and it is nice

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