tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6053567110261738215.post3276504182564950122..comments2023-04-13T02:18:44.932+12:00Comments on Fantastic 7 : A Dog's Tale GBSblogownerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02842716703098243180noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6053567110261738215.post-32881715888413913822013-07-03T10:03:52.635+12:002013-07-03T10:03:52.635+12:00Kia ora Brandon,
You have written an interesting s...Kia ora Brandon,<br />You have written an interesting story, with a happy ending (I like happy endings!). You have used some great words in your writing, such as miserable, and included lots of descriptions and metaphors. Well done,<br />Tsana (Karl & Robin's mum)Tsana Plessiushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01190322250589597312noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6053567110261738215.post-29235195136847818332013-06-28T12:03:07.283+12:002013-06-28T12:03:07.283+12:00Hi Brandon you have a interesting story, its good ...Hi Brandon you have a interesting story, its good that you used speech marks,full stops and capital letters. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORKApi'ihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00875324759617223173noreply@blogger.com